Thursday, December 5, 2013

Angelas 100 word challenge

Looking into the gloomy window, a shadowy figure stands behind the curtain. The figure suddenly disappears. Julie and Greg are shocked as they tip toe to the front door. Creeeaaaakkk, the door slowly opens. At the top of the stairs the figure reappears. the mysterious character moves towards Julie. A knife travels up her pale thigh,blood drips down her shoulder. The bloodshot eyed figure turns around. its a lonely girl WITH A KNIFE IN HER HAND!!!!! "Runn screeched Julie as they sprint to the front door. A monkey like human asks in a crackly voice "where are you going?”

1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Levi and i am from Melville Intermediate room 5 .I really like your story for the 100 word challenge .We did this in class last term and it was really fun .Your story really kept me on the edge of my seat .
    From Levi
    Room 5
    Melville Intermediate
    Hamilton
    New Zealand

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